(ZGen) Legend of Zelda: The Beginning of the End ... [T]
Welcome! I'm not too familiar on every charatcer name, especially those mentioned outside the Zelda videogames, so I'm naming certain characters myself. If anyone knows the names i have put in by mistake, please let me know before you criticize. I appreciate you just taking the time to click the thread, and would love any feedback if you wish to respond. I accept ALL criticism, my work is by no means perfect, and your comments help on improvements. My prologue setting up the story will be my biggest chapter, i try to make my chapter's small, but well detailed, so it doesn't seem a chore to read through a novel worth of a post.
To the MODs of the section::: I don't like to double posts, but when I'm ready to write my next chapter, I'll multi-quote all who have reviewed and reply to all in one post, then reply afterwards with my next chapter. I just don't like to reply and put a chapter in one post, makes it look unorganized. And i do not reply to one reply, i try to wait for a few so i can lessen the posts down between chapters when i reply to others replies. thanks you. If thats a problem just let me know and I'll try and work on it.
The story. The title should speak for itself. This is MY interpretation of these events that have never been told in detail. I've had this idea for awhile. And have some really interesting ideas to scome in the future for this tale. Think of it as a "what if..." to the origins of the 3 that make up the tri-force. We will start, with the very beginning of their story.
Prologue:
Kakariko Village ...
The small village town of Kakariko. The few who live here have all gathered for a special occassion. A newborn baby is about to add to the small population of this village. Everyone gathered waits outside the town's Inn where the local doctor has arrived and prepares to delivery the baby ...
Hyrule Castle ...
"You have to do something! Can't you see she's dying from the pain! I called you here for a --"
"Your Magesty! Calm down. This is normal. All your chaotic yelling and screaming isn't helping your wife situation!" Dr. Meelios argues back to King Daltus, the royal king of Hyrule. "Please, Sire, let me handle this! It's my job, it's why I'm here."
King Daltus hesitates, then replies, "Very well. I'll be right outside. Just please, take care of my wife and child."
"Of course, your Majesty, it's what i do. But, it is time, sir. Your wife is about to have this child. Now, please, step aside. I'll call you in the moment the child arrives."
King Daltus, with his servant, step out of the king's quarters. The both of them wait outside as he hears his wife's painful screams through the solid walls. King Daltus sighs, and says to himself, "This is what every king dreams of. An aire to his thrown, his legacy. I'm scared, Landon. Not worried, though, because my boy is going to do wonders for Hyrule when he becomes king."
Landon, the king's personal servant, arches an eyebrow and calmly replies to the king, "But ... your majesty, what if it's a girl?" ...
Gerudo Valley ...
Two Gerudian female soldiers are making their way back from Lake Hylia and through the Gerudo Valley of Hyrule. The Gerudo are a tribe consisiting of only women in a vast desertland. They have almost made it back home with the Gerduo's water supply when all of a sudden ...
"Oh! Oh, my! Oh, no!" One of the Gerudian women suddenly feels a bursts of pain around her abdomen.
"Felsian? What is it? What? No! Not here! Don't do this to me! You can't have your baby here!" Nuboal panickly rushes to Felsian's side and pulls her down from the carriage carrying the shipment of water.
"Oh! I can't have this baby here! We have to hurry. Get back to --" Felsian yells as she is set down by Nuboal. "Oh! No! I can't, I can't ..."
"Lay down, Felsian! There's no time! This baby's coming wether you're ready or not." Nuboal lays Felsian on her back, takes off her cloak and lays it in front of Felsian. "Ok, we can do this. We can do this. I know you have to breathe and push."
"What?" Felsian menacingly says. "That's all you know about labor. Oh! Oh! Wait, it's coming. I can't stop it!" Felsain scream one loud and long moan, as she pushes as hard as she can.
The new born child comes out with ease after a single push. Nuboal wraps the newborn baby in her cloak and cradles the baby in her arms. "Look, Felsian. Oh, my! What a beautiful little girl you have. What are you going to name her?"
Felsian comes to her senses and relaxes. "Ganian. Her name is Ganian.", Felsain answers, as she reaches for her baby. Nuboal uncraddles the baby from her arms to hand her to Felsian. The cloak slowly unwraps from the newborn baby, falling to the ground.
Nuboal notices something, something very unfamiliar to Gerudo newborns. "Felsian? Look. I think I should've asked, what are you going to name HIM?"
Last edited by hcfwesker; 02-04-2008 at 01:45 PM.