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Old 01-31-2008, 07:49 PM
princecharmin princecharmin is offline
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Re: Ganon001's Poetry

Quote:
Originally Posted by Ganon001 View Post
"I was once a nobel and
responsable men of thieves.
I was choosen to be the leader
of the Gerudo tribe. I desired to
take my beautiful people into a place
where the temperature was fresh and
the land was fertil. I then meeted a
woman whom eyes were like saphires,
her hair reminded me of rubies and her
face was as beautiful as the emeralds.
Her name was Nabooru, my heart pounded
as she approaches me, I then acted like a
true man. I then decided to sacrifice my
people for her life to be a succes, but,
the tables were turned when she created an
obstacle that ruined my life. I killed her, but,
her soul took form of dark emotions and entered
my body. I am now who I am!"
Again, not bad but i found and highlighted some of ur spelling errors for u
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