
01-29-2008, 02:07 AM
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The legend of Zelda: Vaati's Revenge
Hi there! I've desided to write my own fan fiction, but I thought I'd start posting here to see how I'm going. But, if know one says anything, I'll stop. Anyway, the story takes place about a month after The Minish Cap.
I'll start with the prologue.
Prologue
Link yawned as he slowly arose from his sleep. His eyes slowly opened as they adjusted to the darkness. “That’s odd,” he thought “why is it so dark?”
Then suddenly he awoke completely as his eyes adjusted properly. There were thick iron bars to his right and a strong stone wall to his left. Link was inside a dungeon cell. “What?” he yelled as he quickly stood up. “What’s going…” he stopped his sentence because a swirling ball of ghastly light was hovering near him. The ball suddenly started to morph into a body which sort of trailed of like an animal’s tail. Then two arms started coming out of the body. “It’s a ghost!” he thought as he watched the pale white body start to grow a head. The head then took a form of a face. This startled Link because the face seemed familiar. Then he realized who it was, when it stopped because the pretty young face of the ghost was Princess Zelda’s. “Well it’s about time you woke up!” said Zelda’s ghost.
So, did you like it? Please say what I can improve on, or just say if you like it!(or you didn't like it.)
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Last edited by Linebeck rules!; 01-30-2008 at 03:47 AM.
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