Very good! You painted an excellent mental picture for me. Your dialogue format also seems good, but I'd like to be certain. So, in the next lesson, have Rethir get hungry and leave his room in search of one of the Dome's cafeterias. When he finds it, have him get his food and sit down. As he is eating, a big, burly man will ask if he can sit with him; Rethir should comply. The man should talk a bit to Rethir about anything you care to speak of. Keep in mind, he doesn't know what Zoras are. His personality is up to you. Also, be sure that the conversation is the bulk of the post. Don't spend 75% of the post with Rethir looking for the cafeteria.

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