Well, I decided to make a zelda fiction out of a nightmare I had recently, so I guess I'll start us off.

NOTE: The story begins with Link chasing Dark Link, like he's already in mid-adventure, just in-case the beginning seems odd to you. And yes, please critique, I understand this chapter was a mess, but I don't wanna make the same mistakes again, kay?

Chapter 1: The Land of Dark
Link Grinned running through the woods, his sword in hand, he chopped any plant or thorn in his way. He heard footsteps infront of him, so he knew he was gaining on Dark Link.

After years of chasing the shadow, he was soon to beat him. Link jumped out into a clearing, a frown on his face. "No! I was so close! He got away... again." he complained. All that time, and he still seemed to get away! He had to find his secret. Slowly bowing his head, Link sheathed his sword, and continued to walk, kicking stones. He was searching for the Land Dark Link called his home. Where he could catch him.

As Link walked, he heard moaning. The sun was falling, and something was up. Wind began blowing, he went a bit faster. Beyond a hill, was a large boulder. He ran to it. He reached to touch it, but he regreted. It was hot! It burnt his finger, which he quickly pulled back. Then thunder fell from the cloudless sky. It hit the boulder. A door appeared before Link. He hesitated a moment, but drew his sword and went in.

He went down a small stair-case to another door, which he opened. It was sunset. Strange red plants were everywhere on a field with yellow grass. It was warm and comforting. He walked cautiously amoung the plants. Suddenly two women jumped out in his way, without saying a word, they turned around, and ran into the plants. Link followed quickly.

Sprinting hard, he never lost sight of them. Only for a second. He continued to run, dispite his exaustion. He pushed the plants aside, cutting a few, but he wasn't loosing them, they obviously knew where Dark Link was. They lead him to a tower like the one he had just left, and lead him up stairs into a room. The doors locked and The woman disappeared. Link heard or felt nothing different, until he felt the Triforce of Courage blind. Then he heard strange sounds. LIke no music in Hyrule. They cut in his mind, he yelled, falling over.

He shook his head, he became scared, his head felt like it could explode. He yelled out again," HELP! HELP! Please make it stop! HELP!" yet the noise continued. He banged his fist on the ground. Then a figure walked into the room. It looked like one of the women, but when she turned around, her face was a monsters! A loud bang in Link's head went of as he yelled again.

He slowly got up, then the woman ran at him, slime coming from her mouth, and sharp teeth were coming right at him. They looked sharp enough to kill! He lept out of the way as she crashed into the wall. THe sound stopped for a moment as Link ran up to her, delivering a stab. A terrifying yell went off, and she disappeared. He found himself infront of the tower. Or... where the tower was." He slowly crept in among the plants. He'd found the shadow land alright, but he had to find Dark Link, it was his whole quest!"

Looking around, he was cautious if another woman should come up, though the monsters were helpful in a way, they helped him find the towers which apparently was going to lead to his Shadow. Coming back on the hill he was first on, he found many strange woman and men roaming around, talking, younger girls and boys played.

What was going on!?

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