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Originally Posted by Slur.exe
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How kind!
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...a droplet of water resonated in an altissimo pitch as it struck the floor of the roofless temple. As it reverberated, it voiced the cries and please that had accumulated over the centuries.
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Those lines are stunning. Overall, you've painted a poetic picture with your prelude. I find it also kind of cool you call it a prelude and not a prologue.
Grammatical errors here:
reverie-like state
and here:
cries and pleas