Okay. Let's pwn.

To begin with, your first paragraph could use better diction. While, and I must admit, the description you give of the door is quite nice, it is also awkwardly worded and somewhat lengthy. Consider what is necessary and what can be cut when writing a blind character, especially since you rely on a totally different description style then an ordinary character. You are also relying heavily on sound waves, or at least that specific description, early in the second paragraph. Mix it up a bit.

In the third paragraph, however, you really started to repeat yourself. "Anyone one person's song" is an example of this. Consider rereading each submission to see if the wording makes sense to you. Your primary problem seems to be repetition, which is understandable considering you need to describe the scenery with sounds, which do not have nearly the abundance of sight. Look into this.

Other then these notes, I enjoyed this piece a great deal. Time for your next assignment.

Assignment Time!

What's this? Yes, my dear, it is the library. Throughout the library echoes the sounds of history, along with something much more sinister. It is a song you cannot understand, a song of strange darkness and silent mouring. Use these notes to find yet another message from the mysterious Dark Eye, bidding you to find a secret passage through the library to his dungeon. Search through the library, the exit must be somewhere!

Your mission is to properly write a note from the Dark Eye, so check his profile to properly describe the song and the writing such a person would give off. I would like 1,000 words, please.

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