I like it so far.. Just please don't make Zachary a 'boo-hoo my father is GONE or maybe DEAD D:' character. Seriously, biggest cliché ever and it never works.

Anyway, one little thing that I'd like to point out is that you... should do a better job at bringing the Pokémon world to live. For now, we've seen three people. You can just have random guys walking by or sitting in the library or anything.

But, I'm interested anyway. Gimme more of this.

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