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Originally Posted by Szerenade
I found your song very intriguing. Especially the first two verses. They invoke a certain grandness beyond our own limited existence in space and time. Overall, the message is quite thought-provoking.
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Ah thanks, I really appreciate the response.
Edit:
Hmm, I have another piece, but it doesn't seem complete yet. You may care to have a read:
What ever happened to the fields
Which soaked the raindrops?
What has been done to desert
That caused water scarce?
And to that lighting,
Does it come from earth or air?
I've got a feeling I know
But I will not show
For fear of defect.
One day the sky might fall,
And it will be wise to...
I don't know.
Do you?
Let's take a history book,
Remember World War four?
And look at that picture, see,
Is that the moon still gray?
And to those people,
Were the prophets wrong or right?
I've got a feeling I know
But I will not show
For fear of defect.
One day the sky might fall,
And it will be wise to...
I don't know.
Do you?