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Restoring the Luna Bracelet

This is a small character about Sara. This takes place right after The Great Luna Bracelet and is going to have tell a lot of things that happen in those threads. I'll try to keep it clear of what she talking about by putting flash back in, but really if your interested in this tale you should try and read the other ones. The order is as flowed if you want to see the other two threads that lead up to this.

The Pearl of the White Knight
The Great Luna Bracelet

Your free to make comments about the story, but please leave you comments about the grammar to yourself. I'm not checking over the grammar because I actually want to finish this fic. To do this I can't be worried about proofreading it.

Chapter 1


She stood there in the cave a lone, watching the man she loved melt away in her view. Loneliness filled her heart again, sadness consumed her mind, but hope filled her body with joy. Even though she should be sad, hoped pushed on to do what needed to be done to see him again. She had to reach Mt. Humlety Colat, there she could restore Luna powers. It was all clear to her, but the journey would be a long one. First she had to reach the village of Colat before she could even think about claming the mountain that watched over the village people. But she was getting a little ahead of herself.

The water dripped faster through the cracks of the cave now. It wasn’t going to hold up much long now that it guardian and the treasure was gone. She her walk back to the enters of the cave where she met the beast that took her here. She glanced at the caves walls wondering how long they where going to hold up. It was odd really to be walking back a lone.

Drip… drip, drip, the sound of the water entered her ear faster and faster noting the end of the cave. Her eyes grow wide as the truth in her mind grew, telling the truth of how much longer her had until the cave collapsed on top of her. It wasn’t long in fact in was only a matter of a few minutes before the water would carry her away. She dashed forward not turning back. Her only hope was to reach the door she knew was too far away.

The rock wall the lined the cave walls begun to crumble under the weight of the liquid above it. Sara ran fiercely down the cave. The giant wave of water came crashing down into the cave flooding quickly the path way that laid in its wake. Sara ran as fast and as far as she could trying to out run the wave of water that chased after her.

The look of fear showed all over her face, glancing back to see the large pool of water sweep under her legs. In a matter of seconds the monstrous mass of water consumed her body and swept her off down the cave. Deeper and deeper the wave went taking out anything in it path to the end. Sara felt the rough wall scrapping the wall of the cave as she rode it deeper into the caverns depth.

I can’t end it here, she thought opening her eyes viewing the smooth, soft, cool liquid rushing pass her body. She had see this view before somewhere, she remembered it like it had just happened to her. It was around the time she first met Raziel.

***

Sara stood in the beautiful warm sun set near the shore of Giden that was only a few hours run. Her breathing still normal even after treading through the jungle like forest that rested behind her. Her hair flapped wonderful in the breezy air of the sea. She could see a man sitting far out on the rocks that lined the beach. Even with the saw of the handsome man in her view she didn’t seem to help to see him.

She walked closer, hating the idea of having to talk with him. He seemed stupid, weak, pitiful, and honest. Honestly wasn’t something she found to must in men now a days. Her view about them had been warped into something so evil that it was a wonder why she hadn’t killed on yet. Even with the honest he show her he also show her something else. Something she hadn’t ever seem in a man before for. Kindness and gentleness to her for no reason at all.

She knew nothing good would go from being around this man for too long as she agreed to help him for a chance to see the pearl she heard so much about from the towns people. It was said to be a beautiful jewel, one that any women would die to have, a item with unknown magical power and the chance to find something so rare she couldn’t pass up.

Agreeing to help him she begun to use a prayer she had not tested out once. It was a pray that she had only heard about and read in her fathers old book at home. It really had no use at all in a fight so there was really no need to use it. She closed her eyes with the young man following behind her. Walking in a straight line down to the water she begun to pray, “Lord of all water, Poseidon!” Underneath her feet the ground start to glow light blue. Runes formed and ancient Greek writing lined the edges of the circler ring. “I wish that you lend us the power to cross underwater.” She stepped onto the water’s surface, under her an air bubble formed coving her body. Yeah both dived into the deep sea.


***

That it that were she remember this view it was from back then. She remembered everything for that day even the useless prayer that she hoped would save her life now. She closed her eyes, putting her hand to other hoping this would work. She had never did one of her prayer in her thoughts before.

“Lord of all the water, Poseidon! I wish that you lend us the power to cross underwater.” She focus hard, but nothing happen, her body slammed into other wall forcing more water into her mouth. She wasn’t going to make it if she didn’t do something. She thought hard and fast at what she could be doing wrong, repeating ever line one by one. Something was wrong for it not to work anymore. She thought about every word, tearing apart every word she used.

What could have changed from now and back then? she thought, now having trouble holding her breath under the water. Come on what? She thought about it, seeing a clear view of what happen back then and saw him, then remembered the word ‘us’. That must be it!

She quickly closed her close again, putting her hand together to try it again. “Lord of all the waters, Poseidon! I wish that you lend me the power to cross under the ocean water.” She said in her thought quickly changing the wording just a little. The large rune like circle that form under her that time now formed around her body. Quickly a bubble of air wrapped around her, covering her from the deadly water. She coughed out the mouth full of water that she was almost choking on.

“Thank you Poseidon, for saving my life,” she said resting in the air pocket before moving on to her next plan. She knew she wouldn’t be about to fight the current, but she had other plan that for. She smiled knowing the rest of her great escape out of this cavern. “Powerful god of the sea and water, I call upon your aid in battle and in life. Triton give the world back hope with your powerful waves of water,” she said letting the powerful wave slam into her back pushing her back up the cave.

The wave easily over took the current and she quickly made back everything she lost, as she flew throw the hole that was formed from the cave in. She flew up throw the sea and tossed into the sky of the might wave that took her for the ride. She found herself in the middle of the ocean not far from where she needed to be. The underground land she had just fought her way out was truly amazing. It cut her journey by ten whole day sending her almost right into the village of Colt. It was be only one more or two more days walk when she finally reached land again. She begun her trip back to land blessing her good luck so far.
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Restoring the Luna Bracelet
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