Your first problem is a big one.

You completely missed "Personality."

Also, his name is confusing. Please either choose eastern format (Last name ~ First name) or western format (First name ~ Last name) for ease of use. Middle name goes in between, in case you're wondering.

Elaborate on his powers. To what extent can he use each one, and what are the limitations on them?

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