Oh wow, I really haven't posted here in a LONG time! What's this, a new record?

Yeah. So before I get to the point where I start agreeing with all the users here and stuff, I'll just review the chapters first like I always do.

When you first started writing the Water Temple, I thought that the jokes were gonna get old and cliche real fast. But instead, you implemented the jokes in such a way that they actually seemed very original and creative. Yup, you're a genious. And if you haven't noticed, I used to be kinda annoyed whenever you broke the fourth wall like that. But now I'm starting to LIKE breaking the fourth wall. Yup, I'm okay with you doing that. I'm completely okay with you shattering the fourth wall and utterly breaking it beyond repair. It must be really fun doing that.

After reading the above paragraph, you probably know now that I really liked those last two chapters you posted. The only problem I have with them, though, is how some lines are a little bland. But don't worry, it really isn't such a big deal. 9.7/10 for both chapters, Grass!

And I agree with Mn'T and stuff about you going so far into your parody. OoT's a very long game, and you managed to parody it so well that this became even more than just a parody.

I also went far into mine, but I'm currently having such a bad case of WB that it isn't funny anymore. My thread here is inactive, and my thread on GameFAQS is dead. I'm gonna revive it soon, though.

So, the point is, you're a freaking amazing writer. Period. Nothing else.

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