(Navidad, Navidad, Blanca Navidad)… uh… uhmm… oh man now for the first time I got nothing to say. Anyways, here is my review for chapter fifty-nine: The Water Temple, Part III- uncertain death.

Jokes: I heard someone mention that your chapters aren’t as funny as they were since the forest temple, and well, that person is right. Your parody is still my favorite, but yeah, your chapters were A LITTLE funnier back then. Nevertheless, this chapter was as funny as the fist ones! I almost had to take a trip to the bathroom when Dark Link showed how ‘brave’ he is. This chapter was completely original. No refresh jokes of any kind. 5/5

Entertainment: The dialogue was very well thought out and there was not a single weak spot on the dialogue this time. That’s great, since dialogue is a big thing in script form parodies. I love the way this chapter ended, yay for cliffhangers! 6/6

Grammar: oh-uh, you made a grammar mistake. And when Dark Black said horsie, the right way to say it would be horsy, but that wasn’t so much of a mistake. 2/3

dont you mean I'm?

Plot: Man you really surprise me with the narrator thing. I didn’t think you would get it to work so originally since it’s been done so many times before, but what else was to be expected from ya? The narrator thing is going great! Keep it up. 6/6

Overall: 19/20= +A (95%) shoot! so close!
See? I told you making the tittles a little more random or funny would work out well. Merry Chritsmas everyone