Very nice. Sorry it took so long. I have had a lapse in my abilities, but it's all better now.

This piece was rather beautiful. Stirring. And to top it off, wonderful imagery and lyrics. Something I would like to point out would be the strange fact that you describe things so beautifully from the viewpoint of a blind woman. It's not bad, but you should tone down the images from her point of view and focus more on the sounds that surround her and translate those into descriptions.

Assignment Time!

Detail is the key as you open the door to the mighty Dome. The Dome is a place of history, where mighty warriors have trained and battles have been fought. As you walk through the hallowed halls of such a place, a Domerii appears to your surprise. This is the personal Domerii to the sensei known only as the Dark Eye, and he is there to inform you that the Dark Eye requests your presence in the library. The Domerii is something like a ghost, and has no real form, and he will vanish after he tells you this message. Find your way into the library.

The object of this assignment is to see how your diction and sentence flows work. I want to read something beautiful so I can teach you to create beautiful people. 1,000 word minimum.

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