Thanks! :0) And your previous comments WERE helpful, even out of context :0)
Here is my Table of Contents, so far (with some notes to myself which will later be removed...)
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Table of Contents
Preface........................................... ................4
Before I Formed You In The Womb, I Knew You.......................5
He Who Receives You Receives Me...................................9
To Everything There Is A Season..................................23
A Stranger In A Strange Land.....................................31
He Shall Be Called A Nazarene....................................43
I Will Bless Those Who Bless You.................................50
I Awoke, For The Lord Sustained Me...............................60
I Sleep, But My Heart Is Awake...................................71
If You Must Speak, Speak As The Oracles Of God...................79
Wolves in Sheep's Clothing.......................................83
enter Dr. Mustafa...exit Dr. Mustafa, but Alfonso thinks
A Friend That Sticks Closer Than A Brother.........................
Alfonso and Nasser...becoming best friends and sharing cultures
Chapter Twelve............................................ .........
Alfonso is introduced to Nasser's sister
Chapter Thirteen.......................................... .........
the friends begin to see their differences in a poor light
Chapter Fourteen.......................................... .........
'Fonso returns to visit Italians...speaks w/Missionary...
Chapter Fifteen........................................... .........
Chapter Sixteen........................................... .........
Chapter Seventeen......................................... .........
Chapter Eighteen.......................................... .........
Chapter Nineteen.......................................... .........
The Conclusion Of The Whole Matter.................................
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As you can see, the chapters are pretty short.
EDIT: I'm on chapter 10 right now, and have 35000+ words. I'm shooting for around 80000 to make it a true "novel", and there's plenty more turns the story will take. I haven't a clue, yet, how involved I'll have Alfonso be in the struggle between the Italians and Libyans, but after reading Hemingway I'm thinking he might have a lot more to do with it than I at first had thought he would.