Wow man thats really original. I hope your story line keeps up i know my brother would like your comic. Hey do you have your won site? And what program do you use for your comics?

Yah i agree with the tails instead of the lines but you know what you could do to make it more pokemony: you could use little avatars and have the speech by them liek on the game boy. it would require more space however. maybe you can stack them.

i dunno just a suggest

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