YES

A TON better than the one you posted on dA.


Anyways, the amount of effort put into this astounds me.

And the little amount of critiquing I will have to do astounds me also.

Well, to start, some of the stars, dots etc. are cut off by the edge of the canvas. Try to watch out for that next time.

Question; why single out Chicago at the bottom of the page to be so big? I'm prettyy sure they're from there, but I don't see how it is significant to the poster.

And my one actual beef about the poster-

Why is the picture so small?
I mean, it's still there and it's very reminiscent on FOB, but I definitely think it should have been bigger. The two things I wanted you to focus on are there, text being very good, but I think there should have been a bigger picture/more of a focus on the band itself.

Amazing concept, though- a job very well done.



I'll give you your next assignment tomorrow.