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Originally Posted by insaney
Okay, I fixed it up! ^_^ I added a little 'life' to the passengers *cough*, annnd I kinda fixed the left-hand, right-hand thingy.
Gawsh, daughta is so nitpicky. x3
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Yaaay, good work! And I'm sorry--your writing's already awesome, so I'm just trying to be nitpicky in order to fine-tune it. ^^;; If you ever disagree with me at any point, feel free to shove my stupidity in my face. <__<
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Which reminds me...
Nitpick!:
Might sound better as:
HAH! ^______________^
<3
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You're right! *goes to edit* ;P