I think it's pretty good.One thing I have thought of is that when he goes down to the fith dungeon in old Hyrule,link uncovers the master sword in the sacred grove.After he collects the sword,he is ambushed by poe ghosts who find him.link finds himself in a temple,that the poe ghosts took him to.But instead of attacking him,the poe ghosts tell him about his past.At first,Link didn't belive them.But then they showed the past to him in life.Link figures out that his mother hated him,and sold his soul to a boblokin.They show him a mirror that shows a true reflection of whoever gazes in it.Link soon finds out that he is also a ghost,because of his mother.They tell him that the spirit of the boblokin who has Link's soul is still alive.the poe ghosts aid Link on his journey to the boblokin and his mother's spirit,so he can regain his soul,and meet his hateful mother.

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