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Originally Posted by Umi
YAY!! Finally up. Well, before it was closed, I wanted some to comment on my new set. What do you guys think?
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I love the effects in the background, but I'm not too fond of the doll. It isn't as sharp, the lighting is different, and the hair and body are too smudged. The text is pretty plain, needs moar 'oomph'.
Very nice background though, great job.
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Originally Posted by man_with_thooo
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This is probably one of your best. It's not a huge smudgy mess (though that area right above the render's right shoulder is a huge twirly mess). I think the text should go near the bottom, so it looks kind of blended in - and also, maybe choose a different font? Unless you are really fond of that one. It just doesn't go with the image to me. Nice job though.
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Originally Posted by Demon link
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I think you need another element. Everything is concentrated in the center, which leaves the sides - especially the left - looking barren and plain. I usually hate smudge with a passion, but I
guess I kind of like that smudging.

It's not entirely overdone. Great job.
EDIT: Oops forgot HS.
It's nice, but the left side feels really empty, and the glare at the top of Link's head is kind of 'eh'. I really love your wispy things, as usual. Nice job with the text.
EDIT EDIT: Typography tutorial has been updated with two new effects - tribal and pen tool.