I realize you're trying to help, musical zombie, but, please, don't post in other people's character theads. Only Councilors can do this line of work.
However, musical zombie does have the right idea, Marty0. Add a couple more weaknesses to balance out his strengths. His Personality section needs to be at least a paragraph long as so does his Appearance section, which you have forgotten. And his biograhpy needs to be much longer. Tell what Hikaru did on his journey and details such as that. This is your character's entire life, after all.
Okay, work on those things and I'll take another look at him.