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[Altamira] Incathuga Sateerag's Training
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08-07-2007, 06:19 AM
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Re: [Altamira] Incathuga Sateerag's Training
I changed his thoughts to italics and split the paragraphs so he had only one thought or line of talking paired with each line of action. If I only had action, thought, or speech in each paragraph it would be a lot of one or two sentence paragraphs, and I think those are a bit worse than walls of writing because it would have too much scrolling.
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