Well... hey!

First off... the spritework is great. All your copyings and pastings and scale-ings were great. I like the big sprites, I think it works well for you. Nothing to complain about here. I'll give ya 10/10.

Second, off... the special effects. There are some good ones, and some bad ones. The light effect in the first comic, like panel 4. That looked good. But the text effects? Not as good. You need some good fonts, dude. Go to www.dafont.com or Blambot Comic Fonts and Lettering for some good, free comic fonts. But I rated your effects at 6/10.

Third off! Speech bubbles. The bubbles themselves looked good, but, like I mentioned above, you need a new font. The font you're using belongs in essays and vocabulary homework. You need a font that matches your comic, like Action Man or some other comic book font. And I'd pick lighter colors for your bubbles, to make the text easier to read. But, this doesn't change the fact that you did use speech bubbles, which is more than a lot can say. 6/10, again.

Fourth off- Entertainment Value. As far as entertainment goes, you're all right. I can tell it's an action comic, so you sorta get a pass on plot, since you've only had 1 fight. And there's no need for humor (although it would help) since, again, it's an action comic. But there were no good close ups, and the sound effects either weren't there or were bland and out of the way. Since you're doing an action comic, you should get your hands on an old Marvel Spider-Man comic book. Look how the action is done there, with the KaSmacks and the spins and all the good close ups.

Anyway, ET value is, I'd say, 15/20.

So a 74%. I can tell you've worked hard, but you must know it can be better. Try some more close ups, some better sound effects and get some new fonts! That's my opinion.

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