Right now all I have to say is this:

-Ash recolor = bad
-Chickens?
-Speech bubbles need a pixel around them, less empty space, and text not exiting the perimiters.
-Spelling/grammar is horrible. You don't need to use spell check, but at least proofread your comic. And don't type so fast you don't see your mistakes.

Improve on this and I'll review it in seven to twelve comics.

AM~

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