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Originally Posted by Fornues
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(3P: 3rd Snt.) Well, there's no reason to give up now, I have to find this place. The warrior told himself....
(Last P: 3rd Snt.) I...wonder. He thought as he started to focus for the first time in days.
You treat mental dialogue as ... dialogue. So, replace that period with a comma, and make The, and He lower-case. Keep this in mind.
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Fornues and I have been discussing this, and we have come to the decision that you can do mental dialogue the way he suggested or you may continue treating mental dialogue as narrative. Which ever you like best.