Originally Posted by The Fierce Oni

Actually Stoopid, TML's right. Except I have some more crit.

1: Well...Those Link sprites suck. I don't care if they are popular. Use GoldStud's. If you need the sheet, or need them recolored to pink, PM me.

2: I know TML said this but comics that are short like that aren't really that good unless they have some depth. Those were just like:

Comic Number 1:
Look it's a box.
Hey it's got a mask in it.
END

Comic Number 2:
Look it's a sword!
Look I turned into an evil monster thingy...
END

If they're gonna be short, make em bust your gut hilarious. I suggest reading comics like these. There's actually a good one here too. It's called "comic of woot". And is in the thread "Sprite Comic of Doomy Doom".

3: Speech Bubbles are good. All you have to do is set your line width setting to the one in the middle, wrap it around your text, and you got em. Simple.

4: Don't use the excuse: I wanna make em short so I can make more!
That doesn't work. Sprite comics, unless the humor is fast and instant, should be way longer than that.

Well that's all I gotta say. Pretty good for your first one. (if it is the first one)