You really need to stop hanging around Stoopidmahn. Anyway, this is how my first sprite comic looked when I first started. Here is a short review, I can't give a full one seeing as how it is only two comics.

Okay...so...

• You need text boxes/bubbles. Lines pointing to text won't cut it here.
• Randomness = not funny = sprite suicide
• Maybe enlarging the sprites a bit more?
• Don't hang around Stoopidmahn :glare
• Make episodes longer

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