
07-17-2007, 09:54 AM
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Do you fear death?
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Location: Turn around. Slowly.
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Re: The Approaching Storm
I love it. One minor spelling error, where the father says 'to' instead of 'too', but that's not nearly as grievous an error as some that I've seen in the stories of others. I must say, this is really fascinating, and I'm completely desperate to hear the next tidbit. It almost makes me want to do the same type of definition for Tacheon...
Good job, and keep up the good work!
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