OOC: No, you're doing fine. I'm just glad you aren't a perfectionist with sentence fragments. My english teacher bashes me everytime I use fragments in my creative writing. It's troublesome, since whenever I read a good book, there will always be sentence fragments.

On a lighter note, I'm glad you like my writing ^_^

BIC:
"What?" Misaki asked aloud, "What's happening?"

The image in the mirrors kept on changing. From mountains, to rivers, to forests, to towns, it never stopped. Then Misaki heard a baby cry.

"What's that coming from?" she asked, looking around frantically. It was either it was real, or a recording. The mirrors became clouded with smoke around her again, the baby was still crying. The clouds of smoke were blown away, and there was a scene that appeared around her. It was like she was in the place.

She was in a room, it looked like it was in a fancy estate that the upperclass owned. The floor was a deep navy blue color, the walls a sky blue. Placed in the middle of the room was a woman sitting next to a baby's bed. The woman was comforting the crying child, until it fell asleep. The child curled up into it's mother, and the mother replied by placing the baby back into it's bed.

The baby woke up again, weeping yet again. The mother plugged her nose with her fingers, and walked over to get something, most likely a diaper. The mother walked back to the child, carrying a new diaper. Misaki heard the door open behind her.

"Mother?" asked a girl behind her. Misaki immediately turned around, it sounded exactly like her. A girl walked into the room, she was in horrible condition. There were scratches on her face, and a big X tattoo on her hand. Even though her rags for clothing covered most of her skin, a scar on her leg clearly showed to anyone. The girl had black hair to her shoulders, it looked almost brown, there was so much dirt in it. Misaki realized something.

This was herself, but why was she like this? Misaki finally looked at the girl's eyes; Misaki finally felt scared of herself. They were insane, almost like the girl had lost all sense of reality, and could kill anything without a care. The mother seemed frightened, like Misaki had been.

"Annabel?" the mother said in horror. The mother looked like she wanted to get out of there, but she was frozen. Misaki was some-what relieved, Annabel wasn't her name. But...what if that was my name before? Misaki thought to herself. All she could do was watch the scene play within the mirrors.

"Why are you afraid?" asked the girl, Annabel, "Why don't you want me anymore?" The girl had asked so innocently, but her exterior was screaming something bad about her. It scared Misaki, the mother shielded the baby from sight of Annabel.

"I disowned you, Annabel, go back to the Asylum where you belong" said the mother, trying to sound confident. Annabel seemed to crack inside herself. Misaki froze, since it felt so real, it felt like Annabel would kill her right there.

"Who is that baby?" asked Annabel, looking behind the mother; Annabel's voice was cracking. The mother tried to cover up the baby even more with her body.

"Nathaniel Suzuki" replied the mother. Annabel walked past the mother. Misaki was frozen yet again. Suzuki. That family name sounded familiar. Misaki shook the thought out of her mind, maybe it was a family her family communicated with.

"Baby Brother?" asked Annabel quietly. The mother nodded. Annabel began to stroke the baby's face softly, like it was fragile.

"Nathaniel...is happy" stated Annabel quietly, "Shame." The girl took out two daggers that were conceiled in her clothing. Misaki almost stopped breathing, they were identical to the ones she carried. Yet the blind girl knew what what the girl was going to do, Annabel had blood lust in her eyes.

"What are you doing?" asked the mother in a hurry. Annabel looked into her mother's eyes.

"I want to be your only child, mother" said Annabel, and her daggers flew up and went down. Misaki covered her eyes, she heard the baby crying so loud in pain, the mother breaking down in tears, she didn't hear Annabel make any noise. Misaki felt tears come down her cheeks. The noise all stopped. Misaki uncovered her eyes to see Annabel standing in front of her. In one motion Misaki ran to the door where she entered, it was locked.

"We're the same person, you know" said the girl in the mirror. Misaki looked back at the girl, Annabel. Annabel looked at Misaki curiously. Misaki noticed one thing new about Annabel, she was covered with the baby's blood. Misaki walked back in front of the mirror.

"No we aren't! I'm not like that!" Misaki yelled at Annabel. Annabel laughed like a young child. Annabel reached out of the mirror and grabbed the sides of Misaki's face. Annabel was soon completely out of the mirror.

"I know you fear me, Misaki, I mean, Annabel" Annabel said jokingly, "I don't care if you believe it or not, you'll learn sooner or later."

"No I won't! This is probably a trick illusion by the mirrors!" said Misaki in defense. Annabel sighed, and punched Misaki in the face.

"Didn't I say I didn't care about your opinion of this!" yelled Annabel at the girl on the ground. Misaki stood back up and took her daggers out, so did Annabel. The mirrors soon changed back to normal, they acted like regular mirrors now, all of them reflected Annabel and Misaki.

Misaki charged at Annabel, with her daggers pointed at the girl. Annabel dodged the attack and Misaki scratch a mirror. Misaki felt Annabel attack from behind. As Misaki attempted a counter attack, she saw Annabel smirk. The murderer dodged and threw one dagger at Misaki. Misaki dodged the dagger, it deeply cut her in the arm, though. Misaki yelped and held her wound.

Annabel walked up to Misaki and gave a kind smile. She offered a hand to help Misaki up. Misaki accepted the hand. Annabel's smile turned demented as she punched Misaki in the stomach, hard.

Misaki held her stomach, and threw a punch at Annabel, hitting her in the face. Annabel didn't do anything, she just stood there. The murderer got out her dagger, and gave Misaki another wicked smile. Misaki began to run away from Annabel. It was so fast, she felt Annabel throwing a weapon, right when she was hit with the dagger in the back of her neck.

It was the hilt of the dagger. The girl fell down, pain spreading from her neck, she felt everything go dark, with a shadow of Annabel hovering over her.

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"Heh, you'll learn sooner or later, Anna" said Annabel as she picked up her two daggers from the ground. She glanced back at Misaki just as a faint breeze started. Annabel smirked, and as the breeze progressed she began to blow away back into the mirror, almost like sand being blown away.

When the breeze was over, Annabel was trapped back into the mirror. Annabel smiled and began walking off, farther from the surface of the mirror. It was not long until she faded back into nothing.

OOC: Gosh, I didn't count the words, was that over 800 words?

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