Hey, this is awesome!
Nice job, SM. This made me chuckle quite a bit. You're doing an awesome job.
One thing I noticed:
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Link: GIRL?! GIRL?! ARE YOU HOT? I mean WHERE ARE YOU?
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Grandma: Yeah, she's kind of a freak with her ears like that... I mean, *Crying* Take the sheild..
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Tingle: I saw what happened to your sister, and I want to kill- I mean save her!
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Try not to overdo lines like that.
Otherwise, fabulous. Keep up the good work.
(Smooth cameo, by the way
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