Hehehe, that's pretty good, definately something I'll frequently read. The intro was, in my opinion, the funniest part, simply hilarious (ganondorf's long nose, Link's tunic, garbage dump, lmao!). I also liked the part with the snot nosed kid and his mom.
Quote:
Link: Last I saw, he was drowning in the ocean
SNK's Mom: Oh. At least I still got my other kid! *Runs home*
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Lol!
So far, I haven't anything to complain about, maybe other than the fact that the chapter was kinda somewhat short, but that doesn't matter, it was funny. Very good. I certainly can't wait to read the next chapter.