Interesting. I like how you write in first person, I did as well when I first started. Means you've got a strong attachment to your character, and the repeated thoughts made it interesting. Overall, this post was very good.

Assignment Time:
Have Keldar walk through the darkness for a while, and eventually there will be a very bright flash and he'll find himself in the Dome's central area. Basically, it's a large, circular room that has multiple floors have doors scattered about that lead into hallways that lead to the infinite doors of the Dome. Keldar can explore the set rooms (Dome Center, Library, Cafeteria, The Garden Rooms, The Fountain Room).

After Keldar has explored a bit, have him come across a room that looks like the outside to a temple with several statues lining the walls of the cavern on the sides of the road that leads to the temple. End your post with Keldar entering the room that leads to the temple road. Word minimum of 400 words.

Also, on another note, Power Shot has not told me if he or I will be your full time teacher when he returns, so for now, I'm not going to introduce Keldar to his teacher until I have an answer. Sorry for the inconvenience.

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