Ugh...SO MANY PROBLEMS!

First off is the title. You put the text in and then you colored it. No, no, no, and no. That ends up simply giving you crappy white spots. You color the box, THEN put the text in.

Second...the plot. What the heck....I don't get it. I guess you'll explain it in do time. But it is kind of...whack right now.

The dialouge is cheezy and doesn't seem real. "Stop....please, someone help" Doesn't seem very life-like or Naruto-like. Would've been better with "You can't beat me....I'm...Naruto....Uzam..." See the difference?

Some of the sprites are simply ugly from the resizing.

The placement of smoke in the second comic was....not nice-looking.

It seems you put over-special-effected it. If that's even a word. You put to much in.

Also, it seems you sorta rushed it. Not many panels explain movement, placement, etc. Take your time.

6/10....

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