
07-02-2007, 03:47 PM
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Now with less fateful capital letters
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Re: [Altamira] Nathan's Training
Right! Sorry this took so long. I'm your new teacher, and I will be teaching you with Asha, methinks. No reason behind it, but she's awesome and needs to be aired.
...And I really have no idea where you want to take this. Your writing is good, if you can just continue with this same story. Take it where you want to take it, just drop Miss Asha in there somewhere.
Good?
EDIT: Make that Cadenza Madrigal, sorry >>.
Last edited by awkin; 07-05-2007 at 10:37 AM.
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