I may do a full review of this later on, but I have this to say right now . . .

1) Sprites are discolored and look strange. Not to mention that you didn't resize nearly correct. Keep sprites the same color unless recoloring, and only resize by 200%, 400%, etc.

2) Action is moving way to fast to be comprehended. In Naruto, the action moves at a steady pace that's understandable (well, when there aren't a million flashbacks to slow it down).

3) Blur on Kakashi was unneeded in second comic. If anything, it should've been a very small motion blur.

4) Speech bubbles and other effects are ok, but nothing amazing. Only major problem with the speech bubbles is the empty space.

I can't say anything about the plot, so I'll watch this one and probably give you a full review at about 10-15 comics.

AM~

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