Okay...time for ze dreaded review...

Sprites:
Awesome sprites. I love all of them! Not much more to say. 10/10

Backgrounds:
I love the backrounds, too. They're so creative. 9/10

Text and Boxes:
Erm...this is where your story fails. The text boxes are down-right ugly. Well, it's more of the actual text than the boxes, but y'know. Work on the text. 2/10

Spelling and Grammar:
Grammar is key. Spell check is your friend: use it. 5/10

Panels:
Even though the panels are great and sized equally, you hardly zoom in at sections and characters. You need to improve with the panels a bit, and test a few new things. 7/10

Story:
It has a plot, it has a protagonist, antagonist, so it passes for the most part. I can't really say a lot yet because it isn't that deep in. 6/10

Characters:
Character development is needed for a great story, so as it progresses, try to change your characters up a bit. In the first issue, I saw some character developement when the protagonist found out that he was strong. Though that was good, the characters should change a lot later on. 8/10

Total: 47/70

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