OoC: This is my first story thing ever. So here it is.

BiC: I stood on top of the mountain overlooking the Valley of Nor. My name is Crogon and I am an emporer. My kingdom covers the Valey of Nor and all villages in it. The view of the valley was amazing that I was forced to just stand there for a moment and admire it. But I had come to the top of this to look for something. I didn't know what I was looking for but I knew it was important based on the conversation I had just had with my most trusted advisor Norda. Although she was a mere human she did know what she was doing when she advised me. She had sent me a message through the gem in my belt telling me that something called the Dome had been spotted in the area of this mountain and told me that the training I could get in there would greatly improve my skills as a leader and in turn help my empire. It had taken days to climb this mountain, and it would have taken longer had I not decided to just climb vertically up the mountain instead of using the winding path. It takes incredible strength to pull all 626 pounds of my extremely heavy Goron body up the mountain. Luckiliy I posess that kind of strength as result of my military training.

I used to be general when the Verach Military was still intact. After it disbanded I became a wanderer and had soon found this beautiful valley. Unfortunatley several gangs had set up headquarters there. As soon as the villagers saw my incredbile size and strength they begged me to save them from the marauders. It didn't take me much time to destroy the gangs and the villagers named me their ruler, and so my empire was formed. Since then I have tried to grow my kingdom into a force to be reckoned with. But so far I have had no success, maybe training at the dome is the right answer.

I began to explore the mountain top, the snow and cold wind blowing around me made me uncofortable. I hate the cold, normally it doesn't do anything besides make me uncomfortable, but his cold was strange it was as if the cold wanted to kill me. I knew that the Dome must be close. I could feel myself growing weaker and my legs gave out. I began to crawl around in the snow desperatly trying to find some source of warmth. Then I remembered the bomb plant seeds in my belt pouch. I reached for them and took some in my hand. I could throw them, or I could start a fire with them. I decided that I needed something that would give me enough energy to find the Dome's entrace on this mountain. I ate the seeds. Most people would say that was foolish, but after some brief stomach pains I was feeling warm inside and felt that I had the strength to go on.

I began to limp around in the snow and once again the cold overtook me. I could have eaten more seeds but I feared that if I did than I would die. I was just about to give up and fall into my protective hibernation when I felt warmth beneath the snow. I began to dig into the snow with my hands and came across a strange door made from fire beneath the snow. I was amazed hat the snow that touched the fire didn't melt on contact. I touched the door and felt the warmth spread through my body. As I opened the door I heard a voice in my head. "Welcome to the Dome, Crogon." it said. I opened the door and took my first step in the strange place known as the Dome.

OoC: So there you go. I hope it is good, I am not good at splitting things into paragraphs so I hope you think it was good.