It sure looks nice! It's a pretty pretty comic. Very loverly and beautified and all aglow with photoshop yum.

Close Ups were good, and the funniest part was the SOMETHING'S WRONG although the Mario Pasta dash was a little overhyper. And one thing I don't understand, he's all fine and then he says "Where's my pasta?" and then "Pasta! Here I come!" did he lose his pasta, or did it run off? It sounded like he was chasing it, but he said he didn't know where it is. It probably would have been funnier to have something actually wrong, like 'I Left the Nuclear Mushroom Microwave Oven on High with several gallons of combustible liquid inside" or something a little more worthy of that mad dash then pasta. Although Mario does love pasta a whole lot, I'm sure.

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