They both fly on dragons? What are you like six or something? I can see you put alot of time into your story, but you have no strong connections to link to the timeline. And the story is very typical. It's so "OoT." Like Ganondorf comes back, destroys everything, and caputures Zelda. OH NO! I would of never seen that one coming! Start thinking more outside of the box.

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