
06-06-2007, 11:16 AM
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Re: Digimon: Adventure 03
YES!
Wow! This is... good! The speech bubbles are GREAT. Really. You have no idea how much of a asset that is to your comic. Really. I'm trying not to sound to excited because this is really good. The prologue thing with the pixelly font was really good too! Make the end one a little smaller. But it was awesome!
Your panels= Incredilicious. The gray background and the deep red borders is a great idea and looks great! Most people don't make that kind of effort but it really makes your comic look clean and organized.
Great background work, and the spriting is all very clean and well placed. You did a good job of centering your characters right to give a good flow to the comic (your borders helped) and... that close up! It was well done and you put it in the perfect spot. Good good job.
I'll be the first to say I don't like digimon, but all the same I didn't find this boring at all. You set all your characters up well and the cliffhanger was fine. You left off in a good spot for a prolouge especially (I can imagine the other two prologues will end the same way) and it really hung well.
I don't know how you did it, but this comic is great. Really. 9/10 at least. Oh, and I didn't even notice the typo, but it did bug some people. Just remember its not too late to fix it.
This is good stuff. Really. Especially for Paint.
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