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Originally Posted by HitokiriChibi
Where you bent her waist/hips looks like such a big angle, it makes it look really awkward I think - like she bent right at the ribcage. It also seems to extend her stomach making it look really long.
Umm.. could try by making it more sloped, make it a more gracceful curve?
I kinda drew what I meant if you didnt understand that ^^;
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Ah - yes I see.
It definately makes her look a lote more realistic.
I shall definately try making her waistline more streamlined like you've suggested in the final.
My reasoning for the super-slim, angled waist was simply because that's how she appeared in the cartoon:
http://www.wallpaperspecial.com/wall...e-Mermaid9.jpg
But I agree, the sizes I've used look a little unnatural - thanks for the advice!
Cio: I'm currently printing out your pic to write on - so I shall have a critique ready as soon as possible!