Meh, those sketchs arent that bad. the main character needs to be easy to draw. I started my own comic once and i gave the main character really detailed hair, it was a pain to draw, so i made his hair alot more simplistic. I think you should keep that rabbit! hes awesome! i have a similar character. I think every good comic needs these 4 characters. The cool and interesting main character. A sidekick/friend who is either a total spazz, a loser, or a weakling that grows as the story progresses. A laidback and sarcastic type of character thats good for laffs. AND! lastly, there needs to be at least one girl character, who can either be a total tomboy or a total girly girl. most comics/manga ive read have these kind of characters, my comic has these characters too. If i ever get my scanner fixed ill post it up. Good luck on your comic! I look forword to seeing more of your work.

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