Wow, Lunchy. That poem is... amazing. Like Cio, I never really imagined you to be the poet type. (Though is there really a poet type? Anyone could be a poet, really. I know I certainly don't go around wearing black clothes, berets, and snapping my fingers. )

Anyways.... Once Upon a Whimsical Dream is beautiful, and very touching. You seem to have a true mastery of English language, and are far too modest. I hope to see more from you!