Hey, that's not half bad! I enjoy reading it. Although...
"Mido thinking: Finally, a place to distribute my weed."
o_O You really made a huge character change for Mido, huh? Well, it is different, but that good part is he keeps character the whole time. ;]
The entire thing is mildly funny, too. I can deffidently see this story going somewhere. Post s'more soon, kay? :]
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real comedy starts when they begin classes at around chapter 4/5.
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Cool, can't wait to read it.