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Old 05-20-2007, 10:02 AM
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Re: (Fan/Act) The Great War (T)

Ok, the battle scenes are not that greatly done, but i'm working on it.
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CHAPTER 2


*As the First climbs down the cliff....*

Sergant Kelso- ATTACK!!!

*The Second starts to throw spears at the advancing Gerudos.*

Gerudo-AHHHHHH!!!! *spear strikes him in the back* *falls on other Gerudo*

Gerudo 2- @#$#!!!! *falls to the ground*

The 1st Gerudo sets foot on the ground.

Sergant Kelso- HOLD THE LINE!!!!

*The Gerudo's are pushing the Hyrulian Second Infantry back.*

Hyrulian Soldier- NO, NO, NO!!!!! *get stabbed in the chest and face by two Gerudo soldiers.*

Hyrulian Soldier two- Sir, we're losing too many men, we're gonna lose this fight!

Sergant Kelso- HOLD THE DAMN LINE! MAKE A PERIMETER AROUND THE DOCKS!

Captain Nirbeth- Good. Keep pushing foward. We have them boxed.

*The Gerudo Army is now surrounding the Hyrulian Second Infantry*

Sergant Kelso- SECOND BATTALION! PROTECT THE FIRST BATTALION AS THEY LOAD INTO THE BOATS!!!

Captain Nirbeth- Archers, fire at their escaping soldiers.

*The archers start to fire at the First Battalion*

Sergant Kelso- LOAD UP INTO THE BOATS EVERYBODY!!!!!

Hyrulian Soldider-AHHHH!!! *get shot in the back of the head, falls into the water.*

*As the First Infantry escape, the Gerudo Army is celbrating*

Captain Nirbeth- Someone get back to Command, we've taken Lake Hylia.

*Back at Hyrule Castle*

General Wallace- Sir, the Gerudo's have taken Lake Hylia.

King- Son's of a @#$%@'s.

General McHenry- We need to se...

General Wallace- NO! IT'S YOUR DUMB@$# THAT THIS EVEN HAPPENED IN THE FIRST PLACE! I SAID LAKE HYLIA, THEN YOU HAD TO SAY ZORA'S DOMAIN! WHO WOULD GO FOR THE KILL IN THE BEGINNING?

King- Wallace, calm down, we can recover.

General McHenry- Yea Wallace, chill out.

General Wallace- What should we do McHenry? Should we shove our thumbs up our $%# and let them march right through Hyrule? Or mabye just let them kill our men, because it's certanly looking like it right now.

General McHenry- No, we should send out Thrid Battalion in the cliffs near the Bridge of Elden and set up camp in that abandoned town, and set bombs on the Great Hylian Bridge, just incase they take that too.

King- Good idea McHenry, and mabye we can flank the Gerudo's by sending two battalion's of infantry and one company of archers to Snowpeak.

General McHenry- I'll go with the troops to the Great Hylian Bridge. *leaves room*

General Wallace- I hope he dies.

King- Don't say that. Just because you guys don't get along dosen't mean he should die.

General Wallace- I just didn't think you should have promoted him so early. He can't predict enemy movements well.

King- Ever since Link retired, we needed someone to fill in for him.

General Wallace- I guess your right.

*Meanwhile, over at Lake Hylia*

Captain Alyia- Nice job, didn't think you could do it.

Captain Nirbeth- See, being aggresive isn't bad.

Captain Alyia- Until they see your tatics and stop you.

Captain Nirbeth- I'll start going different dircetions then.

General Bazarth- Good job Nirbeth, you did well.

Captain Nirbeth *with smirk on face* Thank you sir. *Glances back at Alyia, still smirking*

General Bazarth- Now, what should be our next move.

Captain Alyia- We shou..

Captain Nirbeth- We should send some troops to Snowpeak, just incase if they attack from there.

Captain Alyia- Mabye we should keep pushing foward from the Great Hylian Bridge and then go to Ordon Village, since it would be a good spot for refueling our troops since it's a farming town.

General Bazarth- Ok, Nirbeth, you lead the attack across the Great Hylian Bridge. I'll give you the sixty-fifth and the seventy-eighth (both archer companies), and a infantry regiment. No reinforcements, because that should be enough man power to push to Ordon Village and set up camp there.

Captain Nirbeth- Are you crazy?!? No reinforcements? What if I lose to many men?

General Bazarth-I'm not crazy, if you start to lose a lot of men, just come back here, we have a base here now.

Captain Alyia- Do you want me to go to Snowpeak then?

General Bazarth- No, I want you to stay here. I'll send Sergant Elea to Snowpeak..

*At Zora's Domain*

Hyrulian Soldier- Man, why do we have to go to Snowpeak? It's cold there.

Hyrulian Soldier 2- Because, if they Gerudo's attack from here, they can start to surround Castle Town, so we have to defend Zora's Domain and push foward through Snowpeak.

Sergant Kelso- Anyways soldier, it shouldn't be that hard, i mean, whats the worse that can happen to us?

*Marching through Snowpeak*

Sergant Kelso- Man, I can't see anything right now. FORM UP IN CIRCLE FORMATION!!

*The infantry form a circle around the archers*

*Meanwhile, over at Yeti's Castle*

Yeti- U mean we kill Hyrule people, we get thei land?

Sergant Elea- Yes sir, you get anything you conquer, but you have to let us put it under our country.

Yeti-DEEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LET GO MEEN!!!

*Yeti start charging foward at Hyrulian Army*

Sergant Kelso- What's that noise? *Yeti smacks him in the face, gets knocked-out*

Hyrulian Soldier-RETREAT!!!

*The Hyrulian Army starts to run away, as the Yeti's are throwing their bodies like rag dolls around.*

Hyrulian Soldier- NO, NO NO!!!!!!! AHHHHHH!!! *gets thrown into other Hyrule soldier*

Hyrulian Soldier 2-@#$#! KEEP RUNNING!!!

*At Zora's Domain*

Prince Ralis-What on earth is that noise? *see's Hyrulian Soldiers running* Zora's! Protect this throne room!

*As the Zora's set up defense at the Throne Room, the Hyrulian Soldiers fight the Yeti's and Gerudo's near the water*

Hyrulian Soldier- AHHHH!!! *gets thrown at a rock, and sinks into the water.

Sergant Elea- Men, attack these worthless Zora's.

*As the Gerudo attack the Zora's, The Yeti still attack the Hyrulian Soldiers*

Yeto- GOOD!!! Now we have Zora's land *walks over the child, throws her against the cliff*

*Prince Ralis is now surrounded by Gerudo, and Sergant Elea walks up to him*

Sergant Elea- Your people are pathetic, it's only been five minutes and all of you men are dead.

Prince Ralis- We were poorly prepard to fight because you guys rushed us in here.

Sergant Elea- Ha, still, you only killed one of our men, and we killed all of your's.

Prince Ralis- Just don't kill the women and children, i beg you.

Yeto- LOOKI WHAT I GOT! *holding up a woman Zora, throws it over the cliff and the Zora hits the ground*

Sergant Elea- Too late.

Prince Ralis- Wai...*Get's stabbed in the chest by Sergant Elea*

Sergant Elea- *walks away* continue killing the women and children, and take all surviving Hyrulian Soldiers prisoners.

Gerudo Soldier- YES SIR!!

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Kind of a twist in the end. Did I do a good job on it?

Btw, im writing this in notepad, since i don't have Word on my computer since it just got fixed last week.
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