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Originally Posted by Zeldadudetp
Please and try to make it longer. The story right now is a little short but you have a lot of time to make improvement!
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yea, i'll make the second chapter longer. and it's going to develop, but if you read and think through what the captains from the gerudo army say, you'll see some character in them, but you see their full character later in the story.