Much better! I liked it! If I wasn't so busy this month with the end of school, I would consider joining! Maybe next month I'll try to join up as Violet (from Zeldish, I already have an interesting side/parallel story for this that I'd love to use).
There was, however, one thing I absolutely loathed about this comic....
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.........................It made me hungry for Cheetos!
