Hmm, not bad! Your overall awareness with proportions is fairly clean, but you seem to have very harsh lines. If you're going to do line art, try to make the lines have a more fluid or flowing motion in the direction they're going. In otherwords, less bumpy...am I making sense? XD

Ah! And shade! Shade shade shade. If you're going to color an entire picture like that, then you may as well take the extra bit of effort and add shadows around clothing folds and such ... it'll really spice it up. :] I look forward to seeing more of your work, and if you take these few tips it'd be really good.

*Oh, and I merged both of your threads into one. Having two "Dump" threads with the nearly same artwork/medium isn't exactally enough for it to be considered two separate themes. Just keeps things cleaner around here.

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