My brother uses fruity Loops for his music. He likes rubbish music, though... so his work ends up sounding really cheesy xP.

I really liked that. It's hard to live up to the standards of a well-known tune, but you've effectively altered it, changing the feel with an effective chord pattern. Well done!

Do you have any other work to show?

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