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Originally Posted by Awkin
I liked it... I was reading it as it was written. In this drought of updates to the webcomic I read, regular updates really are a blessing.
To look at, the plot is nothing. Cadenza meets Hunter, Hunter goes to war, Cadenza is placed with [żloonies?], Cadenza hears Hunter is injured, Cadenza uses magic for the greater good, Hunter finds out -- everyone has a bun.
But it's told in such an intruiging way, and with such depth, that I find myself feeling attached to Borrof, I find myself sympathising with the characters... and that's what a story is about. Well done!
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I thank you for your comments, Awky. Yes, the plot was just meant to string things along; it was predictable and a little boring, but it served its function. I had trouble several times throughout this piece finding motivation and inspiration to write, and while I know it's not my best piece, I am very glad I was able to delve into some character development here and write something readable. The main point here was to establish characters one could sympathize with--and you perceived that. Thank you.